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Excerpt #1
The Visions of David Palmer: The Triangle
By Stephen Reid AndrewsCopyright 2013
All rights reserved in the author
Blood covers the side of my face, and, because I am uncomfortably
lying over an object with my head tilted towards the floor, the blood is
dripping towards the top of my head with gravity. I can barely see out of my
left eye, and my right eye is obscured with blood. The pain in the back of my
head is intense, but the shock with which I am laying on the mall’s floor has
numbed me to the full intensity of the sting. Presently, I have no feeling in
my limbs.
Everything happened so suddenly that I don’t have any idea what
actually caused my injuries. There were several loud bangs which I believe were
gunshots. After the bangs, but before I could react or look around to assess
the situation, I collapsed and found myself on the ground.
Through the pain and shock, I hear more loud bangs and screaming
around me, and I conclude that whatever happened to me is happening to others.
Assuming that I have been shot, I turn my head to the side where I
see other people lying on the ground through the forest of chair and table legs
in the mall’s food court. Moving my head caused excruciating pain that I had
not anticipated, and I resolve not to move any more. When I was younger, I fell
and hit my head on the cement playing basketball in the driveway. My head feels
like it has been slammed against the cement at least a hundred times,
and I can feel myself slipping out of consciousness. I want to lose
consciousness to make all the pain go away.
I close my eyes in reaction to the deafening sound of the gunshots
still snapping around me. Although I have never been in the military, I imagine
that this must be what a war zone with a crossfire sounds like. Within seconds,
the gunshots completely stop, and there is only the sound of a baby crying at
least thirty feet from me.
Lying motionless on the mall’s floor, I anticipate that I will
soon die.
Jennifer! The thought screams through my
head just before I let myself slip away. Horrified, I remember why I was at the
mall and who I was with. Without moving, I panic as I realize the blood I am
laying in may not all be my own. My heart skips with fear as I open my eyes as
wide as they will open and scan my surroundings without shifting the position
of my head. My greatest fear is realized as, near my waist, I see that I am
partially lying over a motionless body. The motionless body is my wife’s. There
is a single gunshot wound in the side of her forehead. I want to scream as I
realize there is nothing I can do for her. The love of my life is not moving,
even to breathe.
I want to hold her, but I can’t move. My body succumbs to shock as
the squelching sound of terrified people fills the silence of the mall’s food
court. In the far distance I hear a man’s flustered voice calling 911, and I
hear the groans of other people who must either be dying or mourning for
someone who is dead.
I close my eyes to the nightmare around me as I think to myself. Please
God, don't make me live. Please take me.
All is black.
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